A night of bewilderment confounds the light, mating souls subdued from the bed of serenity forced to endure an unexpected detention. Hope holding their hearts captive, in chains, bound to uncertainty and pulled along the path of circumstances. Adoration separated from Strength in the midst of trials. Their poignant feelings soaked in oil, cradled over a bed of hot coals leaving emotions to burn within their vulnerability. Helplessness rises among the smoldering ash, the incense to evoke mercy from the gods above.
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Such interesting imagery and emotions in this one.
Thank you for your simplistic poetry, you have taught me how to keep it simple. My poetry always turns into epigrams but you learned me something (; here is one inspired by you http://mentalnotes1.wordpress.com/2013/01/26/mourning-poetry/ thank you sir
thank you, i’ll be sure to read your poem.